Lucy You need to spend more time, care and attention to these relevant blog post entries. You have outlined what each entry is about without any detail or comment in feedback - if you do not provide this detail then it can be read in a basic way. I would suggest if you have time to reflect further and evaluate what you are doing using bullet points. I can help with this if need be. You need to post your animatic evaluation.
HANNAH- LEAD ROLE 
ROMANY- ASIAN NO.1 
CHARLOTTE- GINGER HAIR
Lucy
ReplyDeleteYou need to spend more time, care and attention to these relevant blog post entries. You have outlined what each entry is about without any detail or comment in feedback - if you do not provide this detail then it can be read in a basic way. I would suggest if you have time to reflect further and evaluate what you are doing using bullet points. I can help with this if need be.
You need to post your animatic evaluation.